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Wednesday, 23 March 2011
Spanish Homework
¡Hola! Hi
¿Que deportes haces?
Me llamo Nika. Hago muchos deportes. Juego al rugby. Los fines de semana juego al rugby. Los martes juego fúlbol y juego baloncesto. Los sábado de semana Boxeo. No me gusta equitación porque no interesante.
I have seen 3 mistakes in your small composition.The first mistake was "Juego al rugby. Los fines de semana juego al rugby" you can just say the second paragraph.Another mistake I noticed is that you spelled "fútbol" wrongly.I also don't think "No me gusta equitación porque no interesante." This paragraph was correct.Please make any other changes that I have not seen.Thanks! Best Regards, Claudia
This is a very good composition. I agree with Claudia about some mistakes. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job! You corrected the mistakes that you have found.
hi, I thought it was a great composition and it was very interesting to read but you could had made it two times longer. You had little bit mistakes but it's okay, you can change it. Write little more but still with little mistakes. Keep up the good work.
Dear Nika,
ReplyDeleteI have seen 3 mistakes in your small composition.The first mistake was "Juego al rugby. Los fines de semana juego al rugby" you can just say the second paragraph.Another mistake I noticed is that you spelled "fútbol" wrongly.I also don't think "No me gusta equitación porque no interesante."
This paragraph was correct.Please make any other changes that I have not seen.Thanks!
Best Regards,
Claudia
This is a very good composition. I agree with Claudia about some mistakes. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job! You corrected the mistakes that you have found.
ReplyDeleteSHORT, but almost perfect!! Agree with the other two. Other wise I LOVE IT!!
ReplyDeleteNatasha
hi, I thought it was a great composition and it was very interesting to read but you could had made it two times longer. You had little bit mistakes but it's okay, you can change it. Write little more but still with little mistakes. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to check.
Kind regards,
Noah Jim
Dear Nika
ReplyDeletea bit short but interesting and has alot of verbs
good
saludos ross
ps. you forgot the saludos and querido